By Mary Morel | April 2017
Sum it up: how to write a summary
A summary is a concise account of the main points in a document. Some of the terms used to describe summaries in business writing are: ‘executive summary’, ‘overview’, ‘key points’, ‘issues’ or just ‘summary’.
Short and long summaries
How you approach writing a summary depends on what type of document you are summarising. Some documents, such as board papers, have ‘short summaries’, and others, such as annual reports, have ‘long summaries’ (in comparison).
Long summaries, often called ‘executive summaries’, vary in length, but are often a page or even longer. Short summaries, often called ‘key points’ or ‘overview’ are just a few paragraphs or bullet points.
Question: Is it is acceptable to write the date as follows?
[The] 21st of April 2017
Answer (not relevant for US readers):
The modern Australian way of writing dates is:
21 April 2017
The Australian government Style manual says: ‘This structure is unambiguous, requires no punctuation, and progresses logically from day to month to year.’
However, this style causes a problem at the beginning of a sentence because we don’t start sentences with numbers.
I usually try and rearrange the words in the sentence to avoid the problem, but you could do as you suggest and write:
The 21st of April in 2017 is the last day of the school holidays.
Using my avoidance technique, you could say:
The school holidays end on 21 April 2017.
NB US English and the media put the month before the day (April 21, 2017).
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Fewer and less
Several of you pointed out that in the example given last month (below), the agreement is with the percentage, not the children, so ‘less’ would be more correct than ‘fewer’.
Fewer than 5% of the children appeared for class.
Less than 5% of children appeared for class.
Read what the Chicago Manual of Style Online has to say in response to a question about fewer and less with percentages.
A URL or an url?
My writing about ‘an url’ instead of ‘a URL’ caused me grief on two fronts:
- Most of you treat ‘URL’ as an initialism, not an acronym, so therefore it is in capitals and pronounced ‘yooh ahr ‘el’, not ‘earl’. (An acronym forms a new word, e.g. scuba, and an initialism doesn’t – we often use the term ‘acronym’ to cover both.)
- Since you pronounce URL with a consonant sound at the beginning, it should be preceded by ‘a’ and not ‘an’.
I will have to mend my ways! Interestingly, it is a term that I have never seen spelt out. It stands for ‘uniform resource locator’.
Interesting stuff about writing
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How to use nonsexist language in business writing
A recent blog of mine.
What happened to the proofreader?
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This powerful Tracey Ullman sketch has had over 30 million views and counting. It’s worth watching!
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Quote of the month
‘And how is clarity to be achieved? Mainly by taking trouble, and by writing to serve people rather than to impress them.’
Frank Lucas, English scholar and critic